PERSUASIVE LETTER
Jake had to write a persuasive letter to me. Here it is:
Dear Mom and Dad,
I know you think I'm a very cool third grader. Do you know what would make me even cooler? An i-pod.
I need an i-pod, do you know why? Do you know how loud my CD player is? An i-pod is silent. It comes with headphones so I can only hear my music. I can also download my music for less money than buying a CD. Did you know you can put math games on an i-pod? I can get better at math facts. An i-pod can keep me busy in the car on long trips. Don't forget, my MP3 player is broken, an i-pod can replace it.
If you buy me an i-pod, I will take good care of it. I'll share it with my sister. I will always ask permission to use my i-pod. I will keep the volume low so I don't ruin my hearing. I will help pay for the music and games we download.
Thank you for considering this. I would really like an i-pod.
Love,
Jacob Grinstead
1 comment:
Oh my God...I thought the Santa letter was good...but this tops the list!!!!!!!!!
I'm rooting for you Jacob!!!
Stacy
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